Friday 2 November 2018

family blog spot 👪

2 comments:

  1. Hi Oliver, I liked how you had a clear voice. Your blog is better than what you said. next time add sentences about what you were learning about and what you need to better next time

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  2. You have a good description about it, it is effective because everyone knows what you have learned about and what it is. Could you try not to stutter and stop making everything sound like a question?

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